Writers Tricks of the Trade Issue 3 Volume 9 | Page 24

•As far as means the same as but cannot be used the same way as as for. Correct: "As far as the money is concerned ..." / As for the money ... •Begs the question means assumes what it should be proving and does not mean raises the question. Correct:"When I asked the dealer why I should pay more for the German car, he said I would be getting 'German quality,' but that just begs the question." Correct: The unnecessarily complex plot left me bemused. / The silly comedy amused me. •Cliché is a noun and is not an adjective. Correct: "Shakespeare used a lot of cli- chés."/The plot was so clichéd. •Credible means believable and does not mean credulous or gullible. Correct: His sales pitch was not credible. / The con man took advantage of credulous people. •Criteria is the plural, not the singular of crite- rion. Correct: These are important criteria. •Data is a plural count noun not, standardly speaking, a mass noun. [Note: "Data is rarely used as a plural today, just as candelabra and agenda long ago ceased to be plurals," Pinker writes. "But I still like it."] Correct: "This datum supports the theory, but many of the other data refute it." •Depreciate means to decrease in value and does not mean to deprecate or to disparage. Correct: My car has depreciated a lot over the years. / She deprecated his efforts. •Dichotomy means two mutually exclusive al- ternatives and does not mean difference or dis- crepancy. Correct: There is a dichotomy between even and odd numbers. / There is a discrepancy between what we see and what is really there. F ALL 2019 •Disinterested means unbiasedand does not mean uninterested. Correct: "The dispute should be resolved by a disinterested judge." / Why are you so uninter- ested in my story? •Effect means an influence; to effect means to put into effect; to affect means either to influ- ence or to fake. Correct: They had a big effect on my style. / The law effected changes at the school. / They affected my style. / He affected an air of sophis- tication to impress her parents. •Enervate means to sap or to weaken and does not mean to energize. Correct: That was an enervating rush hour commute. / That was an energizing cappuccino. •Enormity means extreme evil and does not mean enormousness. [Note: It is acceptable to use it to mean a deplorable enormousness.] Correct: The enormity of the terrorist bombing brought bystanders to tears. / The enormousness of the homework assignment required several hours of work. •Flaunt means to show off and does not mean to flout. Correct: "She flaunted her abs." / "She flouted the rules." •Flounder means to flop around ineffectually and does not mean to founder or to sink to the bottom. Correct: "The indecisive chairman floundered." / "The headstrong chairman foundered." •Fortuitous means coincidental or unplanned and does not mean fortunate. Correct: Running into my old friend was fortui- tous. / It was fortunate that I had a good amount of savings after losing my job. •Fulsome means unctuous or excessively or in- sincerely complimentary and does not mean full or copious. P AGE 20 W RITERS ’ T RICKS OF THE T RADE