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15. Which of the following is a sentence fragment? A. Jonathan waited. B. Jonathan waited for the taxi. C. Jonathan waited for the taxi all morning. D. None of the above. 16. Which of the following sentences is correct? A. It’s time for the company to up- date it’s privacy policy. B. It’s time for the company to up- date its privacy policy. C. Its time for the company to up- date its privacy policy. 17. Which of the following sentences is correct? A. Luke and my wedding was the best day of my life. B. Mine and Luke’s wedding was the best day of my life. C. Luke’s and my wedding was the best day of my life. D. None of the above. www.vtbar.org 18. Which of the following sentences is correct? A. The Judge’s written opinion im- plied that she did not believe De- fendant’s testimony about the ac- cident. B. The Judge’s written opinion in- ferred that she did not believe Defendant’s testimony about the accident. 19. Which of the following sentences is correct? A. It’s hard to say how the price of gasoline will affect the economy in the long run. B. It’s hard to say how the price of gasoline will effect the economy in the long run. 20. What is the main problem with the sentence below? A knowledge of correct trial proce- dure is the duty of all of the members of the bar of this state. A. Abstract subject. B. Passive voice. C. Too many prepositions. D. Too many nominalizations. E. Nothing – it’s perfect! THE VERMONT BAR JOURNAL • WINTER 2016-17 Answers 1. C 2. E 3. A , but C under the minority view. 4. E 5. B 6. B 7. A and then C. 8. A 9. D 10. B 11. A 12. B 13. C or B, if you liked Professor John- son’s article in the Fall Vermont Bar Journal. 14. B 15. D 16. B 17. C 18. A 19. A 20. A A. I earned my Juris Doctorate from Boston University School of Law. B. I earned my Juris Doctor from Boston University School of Law. C. Both are correct Explanations 1 & 2. Most lawyers know to prefer the ac- tive voice to the passive voice. The active voice is more direct, forceful and vigorous than the passive voice and better reflects the way read- ers expect things to happen. With the active voice, the actor does the 17