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breath as she stormed out of the lunchroom. The lunchroom is a difficult place for Jen. She desperately wants to be like everyone else, but if everything is not clean and orderly, she won’t sit down. Sometimes she gets frustrated and angry like she did on Monday. On Tuesday, as my lunch stayed cold in the staff fridge, Jen and I worked on solving the problem of where to put her lunchbox after lunch was over so it did not get contaminated with germs. Jen has many worries. “What about in the lunch bins with the other kids’ lunchboxes?” I inquired. “Gross!” “What about on the floor next to the bins?” She squinched up her face and looked at me as if I were crazy. That wouldn’t work. Didn’t I get that the floor was unacceptable? Finally, I found a place where she could hang her lunchbox. We had a plan. Jen ate her lunch and went to recess with the other kids. I gulped down mine as the 35-minute lunch period ticked away. What do I teach? I teach problem solving. Last Tuesday, my students were working on personal narratives that I hoped would turn into memoir. It was one of their first efforts. I had mostly focused on stamina and organization, so their stories were not focused on craft yet. Tuesday was a crafting day. “Paint a picture for me. Show me your setting. Use sensory images as you write.” The room filled with glazed-over eyes and the look of boredom. I was failing. “Can you smell it, see it, taste it, hear it, feel it?” A few eyes lit up. With hushed excitement I said, “Come here,” as if it were totally urgent. My students gathered on the carpet. I projected a page from Cynthia Rylant’s amazing memoir When I Was Young in the Mountains, which I had read aloud a few days earlier. I pointed to the line “Mr. and Mrs. Crawford looked alike and always smelled of sweet milk.” “See that line? That is a sensory image. That is what you can add to your writing today.” Heads nodded. I could sense that I almost had them. Finally, I said, “Close your eyes for a minute. Sense the classroom. What can your feel? What can you smell? Can you taste anything?” Hands popped up around the room. They shared some of their senses right then. “Great! Keep those images in your brain. Sense it, feel it, know it. This is how I want you to write today. Add a sensory image to your work. Bring your reader into your story. Quickly, tiptoe back to your seat and get started.” The sound of quiet feet, notebooks opening, pencils writing. What do I teach? I teach people to experience their world and share their experience with others. Last Tuesday, I was going to teach about geography and map reading. I was going to teach about the compass rose, the map legend, the scale of a map and other conventions. I didn’t. As we explored the symbols on the map and looked for capitals, highways, rivers, and mountains, we discovered the symbol for “desert.” The map showed us that Tucson is right in the middle of a desert. Kids were curious. “How can a city of that size be in the middle of all the desert?” Charlene asked. “I don’t know,” was my honest reply. “What do you think it is like there?” Voices echoed throughout the room. “Hot.” “Dry.” “Sandy.” Teacher of the Year biographies: bit.ly/2015ToY 11