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grader called Jake, who enlists in a school for gifted children. These misfit nerds with the other gifted teens are taken to a history museum for a back to school day trip. As part of the trip, they are all to get involved in a street Parade. Jake and the two other heroes are conned into walking behind some horses, their job is to pick up dung the horse’s deposit on the way; exciting right? The story quickly moves to this unlikely trio foiling a very bizarre burglary at the museum involving a very famous person’s pair of gloves. The burglars are part of a sinister, political cult who have plans for world domination that can only succeed using cloned DNA. If that doesn’t intrigue a middle -schooler nothing will! The plot is very clever and keeps you guessing, however the story is also about the flawed but basically decent teenagers facing real evil that not only threatens their lives but also their loved ones and the general public. The heart of this story is about growing respect, trust and compassion the heroes learn to have for each other, which forges them into a fighting team against far superior odds. Hi Brian, I have had fun reading your first and newly released book ‘The League and the Lantern’. It took a while for this 64 year old to get into the mind-set of a young teenager but it wasn’t as hard as I hoped it would be! It seems that the way boys and girls interact at this stage of their lives is full of exaggeration and under-statements; rarely do they seem to just speak plain English to each other! However once I got into the story, I enjoyed the plot, which was like a roller coaster ride. I soon began to empathise with the trio’s emotional dilemmas, remembering what I was like at that age! Good (stories that call out the best in us instead of preying on what’s worst Stories of forgiveness instead of revenge, perseverance instead of easy wins, serving others instead of just looking out for yourself). What moms say is it’s hard to get both How did you as the author think in the same entertainment. I though their eyes, and write in think it’s because it’s hard to a way that was authentic and do both and that in trying to get not patronising or cute? attention in a crowded marketI think it helps to have two teens place sometimes creators take in the house! I also have a group shortcuts with violence or sex. of about a dozen 9-14 year old “Beta-readers” who read my The book includes strong drafts and keep me honest on moral lessons, in family, friendthings like that! ship, compassion, mercy. Do you think the normal culThe theme reminded me of tural model lacks such basic the movie ‘National Treasure’ human virtues? but with youngsters instead of I do think it’s unfortunately dysfunctional grownups; do increasingly rare to see these you write about the characters kind of things celebrated in cutfirst then the plot or the other ting edge entertainment. way round and why? It’s a mix for me. On ‘The League I understand that 140 vocabuand the Lantern’ I developed lary words that are needed for who Jake was going to be first, middle-school success are then came up with a rough idea invisibly woven throughout for the plot, then developed Lucy the story. Have educationaland TJ before throwing all 3 of ists commented on such a them together and seeing what conscious educational incluhappened. I would say about sion? 50% of the original plot held up We’ve received wonderful feedand the rest changed as I went back on this aspect from both along. traditional school teachers and home-school educators. One of You say on your Facebook my favourite reactions is when page that “We need more sto- the reader doesn’t even realries that are both great and ize that’s been done, but then good” What do you mean by download the companion vocabthat, and I am assuming you ulary guide that’s available for feel there is a lack of such, so free on LeagueAndLantern.com why do you think this is so? and then go back and study the I hear parents, particularly words. moms talk about the struggle to find entertainment for their fami- Do you think the young readlies that’s both Great (engaging, ers might not be keen to awesome creative with great know this, as they might react writing and characters) and saying ‘that’s not cool’?